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H. says I imagine things. Maybe I do. But last night, I counted the floorboards in the hallway. There were thirteen. This morning: twelve. Who takes a floorboard?

| Entry # | Title / First Line | Key Content | |---------|--------------------|--------------| | 14 | "H. left a note in my locker. ‘You’re not crazy.’" | Emily and H. begin a secret exchange. She falls for him. | | 19 | "I stole my mother’s Valium. Just to feel quiet." | Mental health declines. She starts drawing eyes in the margins. | | 23 | "The footprints are back. H. says it’s the wind. It’s not wind." | H. gaslights her. Reader begins to suspect H. is the intruder. | | 27 | "I found a key. Not for my diary. For something else." | Mystery object introduced. She hides it in the oak tree. | Tone: Chaotic, short sentences, cross-outs, stains. emilys diary

| Entry # | Title / First Line | Key Content | |---------|--------------------|--------------| | 1 | "They say write what you know. I know nothing." | Introduces her room, the oak tree outside, and the feeling of being followed. | | 4 | "H. smiled at me in chemistry. I forgot how to breathe." | First mention of H. She describes him as “a shadow with good handwriting.” | | 7 | "Mother threw away my black lipstick. Said I look like a ghost." | Family tension. Emily’s mother is controlling, father is absent. | | 11 | "There are footprints under my window. Small. Not mine." | First explicit sign of intrusion. No one believes her. | Tone: Urgent, fragmented, romantic paranoia. But last night, I counted the floorboards in the hallway

[Bottom of page, in different ink, smaller handwriting]: No. Don’t. He’ll know. Who takes a floorboard

H. laughed when I told him. “You’re so poetic,” he said. But his hands were in his pockets the whole time. What was he hiding?

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